[Update - 6/20/2025] Sally's Petty Revenge Page 3
Added 2025-06-20 22:05:56 +0000 UTCNo Page 3 this week, i definitely started it soon enough with the intent of finishing it today, but I got taught up the first 3 days trying to do the line art because things were either to big or just looked bad when finished.
I did manage to get the Line Art done & the Image colored since i wanted to show off a preview to see what you all think & see if any of you think it looks weirder than the previous pages or if it just looks like another page to you guys.
I'll be providing a poll for more direct feedback, but if you have something specific to point out then comment down below & I'll definitely read it.
a lot of the time mainly went into trying to condense the image down a bit since it was really big in the initial sketch, or just trying to figure out how to get the expression i want just right, like Panel 6 & how i spent hours tweaking Sally's eyebrow because i wanted to keep the anger but make it look like she's slightly leaning into enjoying it, but i can't get it to still look like she's angry still so i settled on how it looks now.
Sorry i didn't finish it for this week, though i do have a plan down for the Future & Page 4.
After Page 3 i'm gonna make roughly 2 images that aren't related to Sally's Petty revenge that'll span either the rest of June or go a bit into July, then July I'm gonna mainly relax while making maybe a few Colored Sketches to still get stuff out while i work on the Page 4 Sketch, and then I'll probably end up finishing Page 4 sometime in Early August!
After that, idk what to do, since i wanna keep doing stuff like this, but I'm not that consistent of a worker to do it at a faster pace & I wouldn't be able to go bigger without it taking even longer, so i might consider looking in to hiring someone who can help make doing layouts easier since it's the part i over think the most, but as for when or, if that'll happen we'll have to wait & see.
I Hope you guys enjoy the Preview!
Have a Good Day / Night & Thank you for the Comments & Support
Comments
Perhaps a good way to make her look jealous and angry while itโs giving her pleasure might be heavy breathing with her mouth open and tongue out? Those are my only thoughts
Radrey
2025-06-21 05:19:31 +0000 UTCI like it! The detail youโve added to make sally look angry or furious really works in terms of conveying to us sheโs jealous. Iโm not sure how you could escalate it, but if you could I really do think it adds a lot to it!
Radrey
2025-06-21 05:16:19 +0000 UTClookin good
Reathe
2025-06-20 22:13:15 +0000 UTC
